It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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, we encounter a new set of professional and personal choices,

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are risky

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ones are mundane. Both kinds have pros and cons, and each one is suitable for a particular occasion and time. In

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, people who are courageous to step into the unknown and challenging situations

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will experience so many new adventures

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they may face failure. The point is,

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these paths may not be one hundred per cent sure, the outcomes will be rewarding, because despite the outcome, your personality will grow dramatically, and you will become more resilient.

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, taking risks doesn’t mean being reckless. Individuals can be cautious and careful,

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accepting to enter in an unfamiliar condition in which they are unaccustomed. Moving on to the negative sides, sometimes

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results in a huge misfortunate, and ruins all of your

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efforts.

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error, we shouldn’t put all of our eggs in one basket, and we must probe

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aspects deeply.

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, the youngsters may decide brashly and put themselves in hazardous situations, in the name of risks. They should be informed that entering every group or path doesn’t mean bravery. To put it in a nutshell, I think the

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outweigh the disadvantageous. I believe without taking risks, there would be no groundbreaking success, and by considering all the precautions, we can gain so many invaluable lessons from our daily intentions.