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The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million

The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million
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The given figure presents information about
underground
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the underground
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railway
 system in three
categorries
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categories
 including the
number
 of
passangers
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passengers
 per year in
million
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millions
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.
Overall
, it can be seen that
London
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London's
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underground
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Underground
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railway
 is the
eldest
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oldest
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 and the longest route,
however
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however,
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 the
number
 of passengers per year in
Tokyo
 is the highest.
To begin
 with,
London
, Paris, and
Tokyo
 are the three eldest
railway
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railways
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 which
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were establiched
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establiched
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established
 in 1863, 1900, and 1927, respectively,
while
 the latest is from Los Angeles. The route in
London
place
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places
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 the highest
number
also
 with almost 400
kilometers
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kilometres
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. Meanwhile, the second place is in Paris (199) which
higher
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is higher
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 than
Tokyo
 (155) and Washington DC (126).
However
, the shortest
railway
 is in Kyoto and Los Angeles, at 11 and 28 each.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of people who use
underground
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the underground
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 train in
Tokyo
 is 1927 which
make
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makes
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 it the highest. Following that, there is 1191
of
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apply
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Paris society travel with it,
whereas
London
 only
775
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has 775
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 passengers. There is a similar
number
 of them in Kyoto and Los Angeles,
which accounted
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accounting
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for
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at
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for
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 around 50.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, number, london, tokyo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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