The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million
The given figure presents information about
underground
Correct article usage
the underground
railway
system in three categorries
including the Correct your spelling
categories
number
of passangers
per year in Correct your spelling
passengers
million
. Fix the agreement mistake
millions
Overall
, it can be seen that London
Change noun form
London's
underground
Capitalize word
Underground
railway
is the eldest
and the longest route, Correct your spelling
oldest
however
the Add a comma
however,
number
of passengers per year in Tokyo
is the highest.
To begin
with, London
, Paris, and Tokyo
are the three eldest railway
which Fix the agreement mistake
railways
Add a missing verb
were establiched
establiched
in 1863, 1900, and 1927, respectively, Correct your spelling
established
while
the latest is from Los Angeles. The route in London
place
the highest Change the verb form
places
number
also
with almost 400 kilometers
. Meanwhile, the second place is in Paris (199) which Change the spelling
kilometres
higher
than Add a missing verb
is higher
Tokyo
(155) and Washington DC (126). However
, the shortest railway
is in Kyoto and Los Angeles, at 11 and 28 each.
On the other hand
, the number
of people who use underground
train in Add an article
the underground
Tokyo
is 1927 which make
it the highest. Following that, there is 1191 Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
of
Paris society travel with it, Change preposition
apply
whereas
London
only 775
passengers. There is a similar Add a missing verb
has 775
number
of them in Kyoto and Los Angeles, which accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
Change preposition
for
at
around 50.Change preposition
for
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