Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live Write an email to your friend. In your email 1)Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2)Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3)Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any address Begin your letter as follows Dear,

Dear Maxwell, Congratulations on your admission, and I am so glad to hear that you are going to the same
where I studied. As requested, please let me share my experience with you to find decent accommodations in the
area. I have been living in a small flat
that is
10 minutes away from the
I was studying. The flat was well-appointed and convenient.
, it was near the bus and metro stations. I could easily commute to the
campus at the lowest price. I would suggest you focus on websites
as Corousel or Facebook marketing to find the flat. You could search by putting the town or how many rooms you would like to live in.
In addition
to that, you must go through with the contract regarding flat booking because students may face legal issues that are out of their expectations, i.e. extra payment for damaged items. I hope that the above information will be helpful
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you, and please let me know if you need any more help. All the best. Thanking you, Faisal
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Include more specific details about the mistakes students make when choosing accommodation
coherence and cohesion
The logical structure of the letter could be improved by organizing the ideas more clearly
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Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely
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Attempt to incorporate more complex sentence structures and make use of a wider variety of grammatical structures
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