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The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000

The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000
#information #people #library #visit #britiain
The diagram provides
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 about the function of
public
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library
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libraries
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 and
its
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 core reasons
to visit
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for visiting
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in
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Britain in 1991 and 2000.
Overall
, it
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 that most
people
 in both
periode
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period
periods
 spent their time
to borrow
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borrowing
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 or
return
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returning
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book
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books
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 meanwhile as time went by fewer and fewer
people
 chose
study
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 and read
newspaper
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newspapers
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 or
magazine
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magazines
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 as their reason to go to
library
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. During the year
of
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1991,
people
 in
britain
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Britain
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 did a lot of
activities
 in
library
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the library
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 just
like
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as
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borrow
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borrowing
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 and
returm
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returning
book
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books
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,
obtain
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obtaining
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information
,
study
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studying
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 and
read
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reading
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the
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apply
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magazine
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magazines
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. Among all the
activities
, it is explained that their foremost
favorite
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activities
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activity
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was
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were
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take
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taking
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 and
return
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returning
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 the book
in
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to
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 the
library
 which
reach
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reached
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 almost 65% of
people
 who did that, followed by looking for any
information
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 took 15% of visitors and 10% of
people
 chose to study and read the newspaper. The data changed in 2000 which explained that the number of
people
 who spent most of their time in
library
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 to take and return
decreasing
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decreased
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 10
percent
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per cent
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while
 many of them started to
finding
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find
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information
 that
makes
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made
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10
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a 10
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percent
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 improvement.
Furthermore
, there
was
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 new
activities
which
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in which
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 the
library
 started to lend a video that took 18% of
people
 who borrowed the books.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, library, people, activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "explained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • data comparison
  • trends
  • usage patterns
  • visitors
  • accessibility
  • information resources
  • traditional libraries
  • online resources
  • technological advancements
  • community support
  • promoting literacy
  • educational resources
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