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The charts below show the result of surveys asking undergraduates and postgraduates why they chose Vaster university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the result of surveys asking undergraduates and postgraduates why they chose Vaster university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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net result of
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 vaster
university
 after analyzing the chart it is seen clearly that the
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university
 reputation under
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 is the highest and second highest at cost making up 42% and 36% respectively after that, the
students
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availability
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availability
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accommodation
 is nearly 3%
while
 that of personal recommendation for postgraduates is twice at roughly 7%
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 the proportion of
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 has relatively low at 30%
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 a total of 44% which is 1% less than postgraduates addition to that, there is a negligible difference between the location and
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availability
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accommodation
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while
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undergraduate
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overall
, it can vividly
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 that the result for postgraduates under
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the reputation
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 of
university
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remain
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 the largest in ratio
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 that of personal recommendation is lower in
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 as
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compared
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compared
 to undergraduate
students
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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