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The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.

The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
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The table shows how much New Zealand
kiwi
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 fruit was imported by five nations from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
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, the values of
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 fruit bought by Japan, China and Russia increased throughout the period,
while
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 that of Mexico and Saudia Arabia sharply declined.
In addition
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,
whereas
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 the figures for Japan had consistently the highest ones over
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years examined, those for Saudia Arabia were invariably the lowest ones. Japanese importers spent 271.1
million
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 dollars to buy
kiwi
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 fruit from New Zealand, followed by considerable growth to 287.4
million
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 in the next year before ending at 325.3
million
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 in the final year. Similar changes, but lesser extent, can be seen in the data on China and Russia, which started from 74.9
million
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 and 0.97
million
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 to approximately 94
million
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 and 2.4
million
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 respectively.
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, at the beginning of the course, Mexican wholesalers paid 6
million
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 dollars to import
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, after that it experienced a significant tumble to 2.4
million
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 in 2011 before slightly rising again to 3.3
million
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 in 2012. Saudia Arabia witnessed the most dramatic drop in the value of
kiwi
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 exports, being at 290.000
million
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 in 2010 and gaining only 82.000
million
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 after 2 years.
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