The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced
The diagram illustrates the way of manufacturing orange
juice
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the figure that there are two ways to produce orange juice
, starting with fresh oranges
and going through the production process then
brought to shops.
Firstly
, fresh oranges
are transported to the factory and washed with an orange washing machine then
the oranges
are put into a specialized machine to extract oranges
. At this
time, fresh juice
is finished packaged and transported to the store. Besides
, the waste solid from the organs is used as animal feed for cows. Next,
after the fresh juice
is produced, will be loaded onto a refrigerated truck, transported to the evaporation plant to produce concentrated juices and applied into the canning, after moving to the warehouse it will be applied into the factory to add water to this
canning. At the end
, they are packed and brought to the shop.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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