The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph illustrates data regarding different food sold among supermarkets in 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, excepting eggs and vegetables, the whole portion of every food was an uprising. First off, in 2003 fruits sold occupied the least fraction of all sold amount, which was only 15%,
while
according to
the 2013 chart, the amount Fruits sold surged from 15% to 17%, At the same time, the Seafood sold percentage was slightly higher which occupied 19% in 2003, and the proportion became 21% in 2013. Seafood
also
increased by 2% during ten years, which was 19% to 21%
However
, the egg sold portion was 20% in 2003,
while
it dropped to 14% in 2013.
Similarly
, the vegetables sold percentage was 25%, it
also
reduced its amount by 2% ten years later. It is interesting to notice that people prefer to buy meat
instead
of vegetables in the year 2013 compared with 2003, the proportion of meat sold surged from 20% to 25%.
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