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It is more important for a building to serve purpose than look beautiful , architectures should not worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

#purpose #architectures #work #art
It is argued that civil engineers should be unconcerned pertaining to the aesthetics of
buildings
 they produce because their functionality is more crucial than
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beauty. I agree that it will save lots of exertion and time for the engineers but
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dont
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don't
 think those inspiring
artforms
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 are
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 of those efforts. There is no doubt that it is time effective and less mentally exhausting for engineers
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 were not to focus on the semblance of their work.
This
 is to say that it is much easier to develop a functional version of an artform as compared to meticulously
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embellishing
 every aspect of its display, which, in reality, makes it a unique piece of
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artwork.
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 encourage builders to maintain
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 focus on the main purpose
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 undermining its quality by paying more attention to
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 outward appearance of a structure. Admittedly, it is true that focusing on the primary purposes of
buildings
 has many pros, but
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 of their visual appeal cannot be overlooked.
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In fact
, they inspire our youth to learn about the intricacies of art, explore its other disciplines , and to an
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 that it is
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persuade
 many to make a career in arts.
However
, the financial implications of aesthetics ,
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its ability to intervene with the original purpose , and
advantages
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 to
architectures
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, lead me to think that functionality should be
prioritzed
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prioritised
 over the
apperance
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appearance
 of
buildings
. But
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also
 like to qualify
this
 statement by stating that
whenver
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whenever
 it is feasible to add visual enhancements, our experts should be motivated to do so in order to
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 fascinate, inspire and enlighten our youngsters. In conclusion, it is true that it will be less burdensome and preserve much of
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 time span and efforts of
architectures
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 by concentrating on the functional aspects of
buildings
.
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Nevertheless
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 it is the
responsibilty
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responsibility
 of builders to include artwork in their projects to galvanize our young population.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Functionality
  • Utilitarian
  • Practicality
  • Function
  • Purpose
  • Aesthetics
  • Artistic value
  • Design
  • Architectural
  • Harmony
  • Visual appeal
  • Form follows function
  • Creativity
  • Innovation
  • Balance
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