In order to cover the increasing cost of expenses, more and more people work very long shifts or have two or more jobs. What are the advantages and disadvantages

In

this

present world, the costs of living are constantly on the rise. Even after of event covid 19,

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inflation rose suddenly around the world. The

argument

that

peoples

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people

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have to

work

very long shifts or have two or more jobs is an

argument

that is

both

advantage

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and

disadvantage

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by

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many. The two sides of

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argument

will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in

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essay.

Firstly

, the high monthly expenses are a reality that many people are living, in

this

context one solution is to

work

long extra time or get different employment without thinking about health consequences.

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, In

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more

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60% of

employer

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work

more than 48

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per week and stress become a problem of public health.

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, the government make

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to control

over

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the

labor

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legislations

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legislation

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and create different politic of

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in the company.

This

is why it can be argued that overload is not convenient for the worker.

Nevertheless

, the lack of money could bring different financial problems, even with the bank.

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, it is widely known that many people in

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and Canada loses their home and have problem with

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the

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basic

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. Sadly,

this

condition leads to having more

incomes

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income

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and

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for it, which

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active and with a mind balance .

Therefore

,

this

makes it clear that financial balance is important for the quality of people. To summarise, the two sides of the

argument

concerning the advantages and disadvantages of

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the burden of

work

and

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different revenues.

Hence

,

it is clear that

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if you do not have money you cannot pay your bills and it

bring

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mind issues.

On the other hand

, you need to keep the balance between

work

life and home life. It is

therefore

predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over

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control

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about

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financial

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and safety.