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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying

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In time to come, not a single individual will purchase hard copy
newspapers
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 or
books
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 since everyone will be able to access all they want through the internet without having to pay any amount. I strongly agree with
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 since the Internet makes reading materials readily available at all places and all the time with our phones and computers and
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people
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 are trying to halt the cutting of
trees
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 to make papers and
books
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. To start with over the past two decades, science and technology have made
books
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 and
newspapers
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 readily available to
people
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 through their computers and phones which they can have access to through an Internet connection, with
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 new information technology, each person can relax in the comfort of his own space and be able to read
books
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 or news worldwide without having to walk all the way to the library, a book shop or a newspaper shop to make a purchase, with the ease that
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 initiative comes with,
people
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 are gradually subscribing to that idea, and the reading of printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 is gradually declining,
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, many shops where
newspapers
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 and
books
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 used to be sold have been converted to grocery shops since they record low sales.
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 to the above, cutting
trees
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 to produce
paper
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 for making
books
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 and graphics has been frowned upon and all nations are trying to put a halt to that. The manufacturing of
books
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 requires the cutting down of
trees
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 which destroys our green forest, making a lot of animals lose their habitats,
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 even though a lot of
people
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 did not like the idea of cutting
trees
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 to make
paper
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, little did they know that
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 process can be put to an end with the use technology. In other to preserve the green forest, conservatives are promoting the idea of paperless reading, as it is easier and reduces deforestation.
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, with more
people
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 reading online, few
books
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 are being produced,
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 there is little demand for
paper
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, and the companies producing them are likely to go into different businesses since their initial business is becoming less profitable. In conclusion, reading printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 is projected to come to an end in years to come, because everyone prefers to read online,I totally agree with
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 notion and
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 essay explains that
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 new initiative is easily accessible and reduces the need for cutting down
trees
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 to produce
paper
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 for making
books
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.

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task response
Ensure you fully develop all parts of the prompt in your essay, including the reasons why online reading will replace printed materials, and provide a balanced view if the statement is not completely agreed with.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the logical flow of your essay by enhancing transitions between ideas and ensuring paragraphs are well-connected and ideas within paragraphs smoothly lead into one another.
lexical resource
Expand your lexical resource by employing a wider range of vocabulary and synonyms to avoid repetition of words and phrases. Utilize collocations effectively.
grammatical range and accuracy
Use a variety of complex sentence structures and ensure accurate use of tense, as well as punctuations, to improve grammatical range and accuracy.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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