The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graph below shows the
number
of shops
that closed and the number
of new shops
that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart reveals the number
of store closings and openings in a particular country over the period of 7 years. Overall
, the number
of opened shops
showed the
most of its figures were more than the Correct your spelling
that
number
that opened among
the years. Change preposition
over
However
, the figures indicated contrasty records in 2011 and 2015.
More detail, closed shops
roughly captured the number
between 6000 to 7000 in the first four years, then
went on to about 5000 after a sharp fall at
2015. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, the opened stores presented the
Correct article usage
a
number
in the range between 3000 to 6000, except its highest number
which was recorded as more than 8000 in 2011.
However
, in 2011 and 2015, the figures of opened stores exceeded the records of the closed stores. The record displayed these two expressions into the number
of more than 8000 and 6000 in 2011, respectively in 2011, and the number
of about 4000 and less than 1000 in 2015, which is the largest fluctuation in this
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