The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The circle graph presents information about the primary causes of agricultural
land
degredation globaly
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degradation globally
in the 1990s,
while
the table presents the specific impacts of these causes on three regions North
America
,
Europe
, and
Oceania
. Overview, the main reasons for
land
degradation
were over-cultivation 35%, deforestation 30%, and overgrazing 28%, with other
factor
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factors
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contributing to the left 7%. Regionally,
Europe
experienced the highest level of
land
degradation
at 23%, primarily
due to
over-cultivation.
In contrast
, North
America
and
Oceania
reported lower rates of total
land
degradation
, at 13% and 5% respectively. Deforestation was the primary cause of
land
degradation
in North
America
0.2% and
Europe
9.8%,
whereas
over-grazing had
significant
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impact in
Oceania
5.5%. The most striking feature was that over-cultivation had zero impact in
Oceania
as it was mostly affected by over-grazing.
Overall
,
while
overcultivation
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over-cultivation
over cultivation
, deforestation, and over-grazing were the leading causes of agricultural
land
degradation
worldwide, their distribution varied notably across North
America
,
Europe
, and
Oceania
during the 1990s.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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