Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

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Dear Mr Ching, I am writing to express some of my concerns about the house that I

rent in

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rented

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last

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week and I would like you to solve the problems before my family and I move into it. My family and I visited the house again yesterday and we discovered two major problems.

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, there is a serious security problem in your house. The lock of the main door was broken and some of the windows which are located in the living could not be properly closed.

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, the air-conditioner that was installed in the bedroom was out of order. As summer is coming and the temperature may

raise

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rise

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extremely

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heat waves, we need to ensure that it can function well. As my family and I are planning to move in on the 30th of July,which is 2 weeks later, I would appreciate it if you

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fix the door, replace some of the windows with the new ones and hire an electronic technician to repair the air-conditioner by the end of next week. I hope that those problems

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be resolved as soon as possible and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Thomas Chu

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Try to add specific details about the issues (e.g., which windows are not closing properly) to enhance the clarity of your description.

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Consider providing a more detailed explanation of why the problems are urgent to emphasize the importance of timely resolution.

coherence cohesion

Enhance coherence by using connectors to establish relationships between ideas and sentences.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout.

single idea per paragraph

The paragraphing is clear and each issue is addressed in a distinct section, aiding the reader’s understanding.

greeting and closing

The letter includes a clear introduction and closing, which aids in maintaining coherence.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

200 words

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Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children ,while other disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: •What class are you taking? •How do you like it? •How long will you take the classes?

Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops, why do you think this is happening?is this a positive or negative trend

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.