The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
The given bar graph illustrates a summary of
casualty
and Fix the agreement mistake
casualties
injuries
per 100 million
passenger miles travelled by 5 types of travelling modes in 2002. The types of transport methods were commuter rail
, heavy rail
, light rail
, bus and demand response.
Overall
, abrasions were lower than mishaps occurred and railway casualties were relatively lower in 2002.
To begin
with, a total of 225 million
PMT
misfortune accidents
occurred due to
technology-based and shared mobility services while
recording the highest number of accidents
; however
, injuries
were 52 million
PMT
lower than the actual incidents that took place. On the other hand
, accidents
by commuter rail
(20 million
PMT
) were the lowest among all the other modes of travelling methods. In addition
, the commuter rail
accidents
and injuries
ratio was higher compared to real accidents
, therefore
17 million
PMT
injuries
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turned out for 20 million
PMT
accidents
. Furthermore
, Bus and light rail
accidents
were relatively similar (76 million
PMT
) ; however
, the bus injuries
were higher compared to light rail
injuries
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