The table below compares the data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries.

The table below compares the data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries.
The table illustrates information
such
as the
number
of employees, the annual catch, the annual cost, and the annual fuel between big and small companies in the marine fishing industry. Overview, For the
number
of employees, the big companies are hiring less
number
of workers compared to the small ones. Large enterprises are able to supply their
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fishes
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to industrial processes meanwhile small-scale businesses are unable to do it. There are
also
vast differences in terms of money spent on employees' salaries and fuel annually. For the large company, it only requires 500,000 personnel meanwhile small
business
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hire 120,000,000 personnel. For the
number
of catches, the big one obtains 29 million tonnes for food and 22 million tonnes for industrial
process
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.
On the other hand
, for small company annual catches is short of 5 million tonnes compared to large businesses.
Moreover
, small-scale industry is unable to be fish supplier for industrial process. Regarding the annual cost, huge organizations need around 25,000-250,000 euros to compensate their workers.
In contrast
, the
small scale
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one only needs around 200-3000 euros per
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for their personnel. For oil consumption, small-scale and large-scale organizations spend 8,500 and 65,000 euros, respectively.
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