the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in 4 asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040

the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in 4 asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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The line graph featured below provides information on the proportion of the inhabitants in Phillippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia for a period of 5 decades (1970 to 2020) with expectations for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, It is evident that all the cities experienced a rise in their number and it is anticipated that the increase will remain consistent in years to come.
However
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, Malaysians showed the highest number of residents of all the four countries.
To begin
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with, Both Indonesia and Malaysia witnessed a consistent growth in their number. To expatiate, Indonesia had about 12% of the entire populace in 1970 , unlike the latter which had a higher figure of 31% more than 10% of the Indonesians. Both city's numbers increased gradually to slightly above 20 and around 45 before increasing significantly below 80% and around 50% in 2020.
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,it is predicted that there will be a dramatic increase by 2040.
In contrast
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, those resident in the Philippines and Thailand respectively showed fluctuations and their numbers were stable at some point. Filipinos' figure was relatively stable at around 1/3rd of the population by 1970 and 1980, before increasing sharply to almost 1/2 of the population by 1990. A slight decline was observed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • rural-urban migration
  • economic development
  • industrialization
  • infrastructure strain
  • environmental impacts
  • social challenges
  • urban planning
  • government policies
  • housing policies
  • public services
  • trend analysis
  • prediction
  • initiatives
  • urban growth management
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