The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The above bar graph illustrates donations paid to developing countries from 5 organisations for 4 years.

Overall

, by all 5 managements, there were

a

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significant fluctuations in donated

money

throught

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through

throughout

the period.

Organisation

2 donated the most sum of funds within the time period

whereas

,

organisation

4 gave the least number of cash from 2008 to 2011.

To begin

with, the highest figure of payment was given by

organisation

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2 in the year 2011, which was about 2.6

billion

dollars

;

however

, during that same year, institution 5 donated the lowest amount of cash (0.4

billion

dollars

).

On the other hand

, as mentioned above institution 2 donated the most number of

money

but in 2008,

organisation

5 donated a similar amount of donation (1.3

billion

dollars

) as

Organisation

2.

In addition

, 4 organisations donated more than half a

billion

dollars

throughout

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2008,2010

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and 2011, but

in contrast

, only during the year 2009,

organisation

4 donated

money

lower than 0.5

billion

.

However

, beginning of the period (2008), the least amount of

money

was given by

organisation

1.