The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
the table
depict
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depicts
the
information about the number of Correct article usage
apply
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children
childrens
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children
which
were born in Correct pronoun usage
who
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Australia
austrailia
over a period of two and half decade since 1981
after analyzing the table, the Correct your spelling
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woman
from age 40 to 44 who had no Fix the agreement mistake
women
children
was 8.5% in 1981 this
percentage
rose to 9.7% after four year
of Change to a plural noun
years
interval
. the women with had given birth to Fix the agreement mistake
intervals
single
child and double were 7.6% and 29% in the year Add an article
a single
of
1981 Change preposition
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while
this
inclined gradually and reached 8.7% and 35% over a four year period the percentage
of same
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the same
woman
with 3-4 or more Fix the agreement mistake
women
children
were much higher approximately to 28%
furthermore
, from 1996 to 2006, the childlesss
woman ratio went up from 12% to 15% Correct your spelling
childless
while
for one children
it reached Change to a singular noun
child
to
13 % a decade later. Change preposition
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whereas
there was no difference in the percentage
of two children
and remained there but for three or more children
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to its lowest point and Wrong verb form
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move
downwardly between 1996 to 2006
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overall
, it can be vividly manifested that the women from 40-44 years old had more children
initially
and this
percentage
decreased over time.Submitted by abdulahad08600 on
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