You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Rona Lyn Olivar, an ICU Nurse at the Urdaneta City Sacred Heart Hospital, located in the province of Pangasinan in the Philippines. I have learned from a colleague that you will conduct an Electrocardiogram Training in Singapore. I am writing to ask for some specific information regarding the

seminar

schedule, program details, accommodation

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and the cost.

Firstly

, with regards to dates and time, what will be the

seminar

schedule and what time would it begin and end each day?

Secondly

, please notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. I am wondering if there is any special consideration for the registered nurses who will be attending the

seminar

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And

finally

, I would

also

like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the

seminar

? I am very much interested in attending the

seminar

and your reply would help me plan for it in advance. So, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns. Yours faithfully, Rona Olivar

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Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for the context of a seminar inquiry.

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6 paragraphs

196 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members. Do you agree?

Nowadays, young people spend much of their time watching TV and playing video games. Some people think these activities are bad for a young person's mental and physical health. Do you agree or disagree?

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together. Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?