You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Rona Lyn Olivar, an ICU Nurse at the Urdaneta City Sacred Heart Hospital, located in the province of Pangasinan in the Philippines. I have learned from a colleague that you will conduct an Electrocardiogram Training in Singapore. I am writing to ask for some specific information regarding the

seminar

schedule, program details, accommodation

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and the cost.

Firstly

, with regards to dates and time, what will be the

seminar

schedule and what time would it begin and end each day?

Secondly

, please notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. I am wondering if there is any special consideration for the registered nurses who will be attending the

seminar

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And

finally

, I would

also

like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the

seminar

? I am very much interested in attending the

seminar

and your reply would help me plan for it in advance. So, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns. Yours faithfully, Rona Olivar

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Include specific examples or relevant details to fully support each inquiry within the letter.

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Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for the context of a seminar inquiry.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

196 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disavdantages to living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Nowadays , women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally (e.g. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environmental responsibility while others believe that tourists should not accept any responsibility at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative impacts?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+