The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

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The graph indicates data related to major sections of Southland’s export in 2000 and 2023, and forecast its future state in 2025.

Overall

it is clear that

the main part of the export is accounted for by international tourism;

while

the

meat

products

has

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the least quota. Considering 2000 and 2023, what stands out from the scheme is that all studied

part

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parts

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have been improved except

meat

products

Also

, the greatest segment of exports, in 2023, belongs to dairy

products

with 10

billions pound

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within the period.

Conversely

meat

products

have the lowest rank in the same year by roughly 11 million pound differences with the top rank.

On the other hand

, international visitors

had

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played the most dominant role in 2000.

While

diary

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dairy

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and

meat

, 6 and with approximately 7

billions

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respectively were in the next ranks. Looking forward, it can be seen that international backpackers reportedly will be the crucial aspect of exports.

Moreover

, it is

stimated

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stated

that

meat

production will be third to dairies.

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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

Some people think books are lossing their importance in information and entertainment purposes.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, many people have easy access to computers and a large number of children play computer games.

You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child. say when and where you will teach the child. explain what books you would like to borrow.

One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified food is a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?