The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
The graph indicates data related to major sections of Southland’s export in 2000 and 2023, and forecast its future state in 2025.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main part of the export is accounted for by international tourism; while
the meat
products
has
the least quota.
Considering 2000 and 2023, what stands out from the scheme is that all studied Change the verb form
have
part
have been improved except Fix the agreement mistake
parts
meat
products
. Also
, the greatest segment of exports, in 2023, belongs to dairy products
with 10 billions pound
within the period. Fix the agreement mistake
billion pounds
Conversely
, meat
products
have the lowest rank in the same year by roughly 11 million pound differences with the top rank. On the other hand
, international visitors had
played the most dominant role in 2000. Unnecessary verb
apply
While
diary
and Correct your spelling
dairy
meat
, 6 and with approximately 7 billions
respectively were in the next ranks.
Looking forward, it can be seen that international backpackers reportedly will be the crucial aspect of exports. Change to singular
billion
Moreover
, it is stimated
that Correct your spelling
stated
meat
production will be third to dairies.Submitted by n97.mortazian on
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