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The table below compares the data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries.

The table below compares the data for the world’s large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries.
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The table demonstrates the similarities and differences in statistics between big-scale and small-scale
boats
 in
marine
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the marine
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 fishing industry.
Overall
,
small scale
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small-scale
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- fishing
boats
 accommodate much more employees than
big scale
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big-scale
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- industrial
ships
.
However
, no fishing
boats
 are used for an industrial process,
wereas
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whereas
 some industrial
ships
 are
expolited
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exploited
 for
this
 procedure.
To begin
, small fishing
boats
 use 120000000 workers,
while
 only 500000 people work on industrial
ships
. The numbers
food
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trasportation
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transportation
 are relatively similar for industrial and fishing
ships
, at 29 and 24, respectively.
In contrast
, there are no
small scale
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small-scale
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-
boats
 utilised for an industrial process, showing that
this
 type of transport is used for other purposes. Following that, the annual wage for each employee is 25000-350000 (big scale
ships
) and
considerably
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 smaller one is for small
boats
, at 200-3000.
Moreover
, 65000 fuel is consumed by big
ships
, but just 8500 by small
boats
, which represents that small vessels are more sustainable.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boats, ships with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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