Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
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, with some seeing it to be more important to them. There are various Fix the agreement mistake
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as well as
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.
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money
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life
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promote
development both in a Correct subject-verb agreement
promotes
person
and the country at large. Use synonyms
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amenities
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money,
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one
from the harsh weather Use synonyms
as well as
security to give human peace and belonging in the environment.
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Secondly
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use of Use synonyms
money
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money
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by
acquisition
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the acquisition
as well as
buying profitable shares.
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good
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which
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and
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.
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In addition
, there are other factors apart from Linking Words
money
that are important for a good Use synonyms
life
. Honesty is a very good variable that Use synonyms
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who
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include
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person
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person
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a
loyal individual, Correct word choice
and a
they
all will help both themselves and the country at large.
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apply
right
uses of Use synonyms
money
include the ability to afford basic amenities, good education, good health care and Use synonyms
also
helping others in need. Other good factors apart from Linking Words
money
include; honesty, hard work, kindness, dedication and smartness.Use synonyms
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