The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares how many
visitors
travelled to a specific Caribbean island
for touristic purposes in terms of the number
of total visitors
and their accommodation preferences (staying on cruise
shipS
or Correct your spelling
ships
the
Change preposition
on the
island
) from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the general pattern was for the total number
of visitors
to dramatically increase in this
time period.
In 2010, the number
of visitors
on the island
was 0.75 million
. In contrast
, the rate of travelling and staying on a cruise
was only 0.25 million
visitors
in the same time period and the most popular visiting type to the island
was cruise
visitors
in 2016 with 1.5 million
people, While
the visitors
staying in
Change preposition
on
island
accommodations did not reach the number
of visitors
staying on a cruise
ship and the rate was slightly lower at 1.25 million
visitors
which took up the second alternative in the total amount of tourists in the same year.
Out of a total of 3.5 million
visitors
, the majority consisted of cruise
ship visitors
with 2 million
in 2017. In comparison, the number
of tourists staying on the island
fluctuated and did not exceed the 1.5 million
barrier in the seven years
period.Correct your spelling
seven-year
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