The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares how many
visitors
travelled to a specific Caribbean
island
for touristic purposes in terms of the
number
of total
visitors
and their accommodation preferences (staying on
cruise
shipS
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ships
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or
the
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on the
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island
) from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the general pattern was for the total
number
of
visitors
to dramatically increase in
this
time period. In 2010, the
number
of
visitors
on the
island
was 0.75
million
.
In contrast
, the rate of travelling and staying on a
cruise
was only 0.25
million
visitors
in the same time period and the most popular visiting type to the
island
was
cruise
visitors
in 2016 with 1.5
million
people,
While
the
visitors
staying
in
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on
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island
accommodations did not reach the
number
of
visitors
staying on a
cruise
ship and the rate was slightly lower at 1.25
million
visitors
which took up the second alternative in the total amount of tourists in the same year. Out of a total of 3.5
million
visitors
, the majority consisted of
cruise
ship
visitors
with 2
million
in 2017. In comparison, the
number
of tourists staying on the
island
fluctuated and did not exceed the 1.5
million
barrier in the
seven years
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seven-year
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period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend analysis
  • Fluctuation
  • Shop closures
  • Retail openings
  • Economic conditions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Local economy
  • Business dynamics
  • Commercial landscape
  • Statistical comparison
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Consumer trends
  • Market forces
  • Business cycle
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