The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares how many
visitors
travelled to a specific Caribbean Use synonyms
island
for touristic purposes in terms of the Use synonyms
number
of total Use synonyms
visitors
and their accommodation preferences (staying on Use synonyms
cruise
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shipS
or Correct your spelling
ships
the
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on the
island
) from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the general pattern was for the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to dramatically increase in Use synonyms
this
time period.
In 2010, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
on the Use synonyms
island
was 0.75 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the rate of travelling and staying on a Linking Words
cruise
was only 0.25 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
in the same time period and the most popular visiting type to the Use synonyms
island
was Use synonyms
cruise
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visitors
in 2016 with 1.5 Use synonyms
million
people, Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
visitors
staying Use synonyms
in
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on
island
accommodations did not reach the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on a Use synonyms
cruise
ship and the rate was slightly lower at 1.25 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
which took up the second alternative in the total amount of tourists in the same year.
Out of a total of 3.5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
, the majority consisted of Use synonyms
cruise
ship Use synonyms
visitors
with 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017. In comparison, the Use synonyms
number
of tourists staying on the Use synonyms
island
fluctuated and did not exceed the 1.5 Use synonyms
million
barrier in the Use synonyms
seven years
period.Correct your spelling
seven-year
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