The graph below shows how much money a city council gave to book clubs over a four-year period.
The graph gives information about the
amount
of money
which a city council donates for
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to
book
clubs and Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
club
members
over a period of 4 years
. It shows the trends over a period of 4 years
.
By and large, there was
a lot of fluctuations between Correct subject-verb agreement
were
money
donation and the members
of book
Correct article usage
the book
club
. Amount
of Correct article usage
The amount
money
a city gave to book
clubs rose significantly in the first 2 years
and decreased in the next 2 years
. In year
1 and 2, the number of Fix the agreement mistake
years
members
in the book
club
fell but there was a dramatic increase in year
3,4.
According to
the chart, from first
Correct article usage
the first
year
to second
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the second
year
, the amount
of money
slightly increased from 20,000$ to 22,500$. Although
, in third
Change the article
the third
year
, it ascended to 40,000, in year
4 it fell to 35,000.
In the first two year
, Change to a plural noun
years
while
the amount
of money
increased, the number of book
club
members
decreased steadily from 6000 to 5000.
However
, there was a sharp increase in the next two years
, the number of members
increased to 12,000 people.Submitted by tonykim09 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, book, club, members, years, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 4 times.
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