The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph illustrates the amount of closings and
openings
of shops during a 7 years
period starting in 2011.
Replace the word
7-year
Overall
, the number
of openings
experienced a noticable
decrease Correct your spelling
noticeable
while
this
number
witnessed a little decline after a large fluctuation. At the beginning, the number
of closures
was the highest while
it placed at the lowest at the end
.
In 2011, over 8000 shops opened following which the numbers plummeted and reached 4000 in 2012 while
the closures
experienced a regular decrease from 6500 and at that year stood at 6000. After 2012, both numbers rose sharply and reached the same point at 6500 while
, after that both plummeted and the rate of closures
and openings
reached 1000 and 4000 respectively.
After 2015, a large surge for closuring
the shops was started and it stood at 5200 in 2016 when the rate of opening was not changed and remained steady at the same time. since 2016, the Correct your spelling
closing
number
of closures
decreased gradually. In contrast
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
openings
witnessed an increase and they reached 4100 and 5000 respectively.Submitted by mohammad.bameri.1380 on
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