32.Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A group of humans believe that
art
may be made by each person Use synonyms
whereas
the other group supports that it can be only made by those with Linking Words
talent
. Use synonyms
This
essay discusses these opinions, but in my Linking Words
opinion
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opinion,
art
is for everyone and it does not matter any ability.
First of all, when children commence their study life, schools Use synonyms
provides
them Change the verb form
provide
both
kinds of subjects; science and non-science( Add the preposition
with both
art
, cooking, poetry etc.). These pupils choose any type of them for their Use synonyms
talent
or interests. Undoubtedly the majority of Use synonyms
tenageers
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teenagers
takes
priority over exciting and Correct subject-verb agreement
take
colorful
subjects Change the spelling
colourful
while
they do not have Linking Words
talent
. It depends on their determination and Use synonyms
hard-working
, because some time later they can be successful. Correct word choice
hard work
For example
, the prominent dancer of Azerbaijan Faig Agayev started his career without any dance ability, but Linking Words
then
he participated Linking Words
specific
courses and learned all Change preposition
in specific
details
about Correct article usage
the details
national
dances of his country.
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the national
On the other hand
, the other groups of people think that Linking Words
art
requires speciality which artist needs Use synonyms
it
to create some pieces of Correct pronoun usage
apply
art
. They confirm that if any singer does not good voice for singing songs, nobody can build it later. At the same time, Use synonyms
painter
or poet may inspire nature, Correct article usage
a painter
colurs
or any parts of daily life, Correct your spelling
colours
people
cannot fix these abilities on their Correct word choice
but people
brain
and soul. Fix the agreement mistake
brains
For example
, the naturalist painter of Azerbaijan Fuad Karimov said that her brother Arif Karimov tried to draw some Linking Words
portrets
in his Correct your spelling
portraits
chilhood
, Correct your spelling
childhood
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however
he could not Add the comma(s)
however,
it
perfectly, because it connected with Add a missing verb
do it
talent
, not generation.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
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first
idea supported human Change the article
the first
factor
and determination, the second one stood on the ability for Fix the agreement mistake
factors
art
. l think that everybody can be Use synonyms
artist
, it does not depend on Correct article usage
an artist
talant
, just dedication and Correct your spelling
talent
deep-working
.Correct your spelling
deep working
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