You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: give details about the concert describe how you won the tickets explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

Dear Abc, I hope
letter finds you in a pink of health. Well, I have received two tickets
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Sidhu's concert
that is
going to be held at Bremlea city centre, Brampton on December
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24, 2023 during Christmas Eve. I am extremely excited about going and enjoying
event. Actually, just two days ago, I saw that Sidhu posted on his Instagram account about his concert details
along with
, he mentioned a site to get tokens online by playing a simple game. Unfortunately, I just took a little longer as the game was a mathematical expression to solve.
, I was able to grab only 2 bookings and at
point, ''I felt like, I was on
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cloud nine.''
my younger brother was going to join me
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something urgent came up for him so, he could not make it.
, I got upset as I did not want to go alone.
, I thought of you being a crazy fan of Sidhu just like I. I guess we are going to enjoy a lot
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if you join me. Looking forward to your reply, Your loving, Navneet Kaur.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter is well-structured with clear introductory and concluding paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to separate different ideas to enhance clarity and organization.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task in a relevant manner.
task achievement
Adopt a consistent formal or informal tone throughout the letter; avoid switching between the two.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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