The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
The bar diagram illustrates the total health
spendings
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as
proportion
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a proportion
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of GDP for 5
countries
(
Japan
, Italy, France, Germany,
USA
) for the year 2002.
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, it can be easily seen that
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spendings
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spending
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of people living in the
USA
are
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the highest among the given
countries
whilst
Japan
's is the lowest. In all
countries
, public spending is
higher
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a higher
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rate than private spending except
USA
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the USA
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.
USA
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is on the top
as
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a
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highest health expenditure 10
percent
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of public spending and 12
percent
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of private spending, and it is
an
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only country with a higher amount of private
spendings
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spending
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than public ones.
Following
this
, there
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is
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2
countries
with pretty similar rates around 8
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in public and approximately 4 and 2 in Germany and France, respectively.
Japan
and Italy are taking
the
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last
place of the expenditure top, in public
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around 4 and 5 and in private ones around 2 and 3, respectively for
Japan
and Italy.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words spendings, countries, japan, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health expenditure
  • Percentage of GDP
  • Trend analysis
  • Economic prosperity
  • Health outcomes
  • Quality of healthcare
  • Allocation of resources
  • Healthcare services
  • Political, social, and economic factors
  • International organizations
  • Government policies
  • Predictive trends
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