The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
As can be seen, the graph provides information regarding the
number
of tourists visiting a
Caribbean
Island
from 2010 until 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of tourists who came to
Caribbean
Island
experienced an upward trend from 2010 until 2017. Up until 2015, the
number
of visitors staying on the
island
always exceeded visitors staying on the cruise. Looking in more detail, people who visited
Caribbean
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Island
and stayed on
the
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cruise ships in 2010 were more than a half and
millions
. Even though the amount had
a
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stagnancy until 2011, it
could climb
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climbed
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up
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and reached 1,5
millions
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million
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of
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visitors in 2013. The
number
did not change from 2013 until 2015,
however
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however,
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it went down to approximately 1,25
millions
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million
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in 2016 before
bounced
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bouncing
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back to 1,5
millions
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million
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in 2017. In 2010, there were around a quarter of
millions
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millions of
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tourists that stayed on the
Caribbean
Island
. The
number
increased in 2011 but
then
fell down in 2012 before
raising
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rising
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up
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from 2013 until 2017 and it reached 2
millions
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million
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people.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, caribbean, island, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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