The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
As can be seen, the graph provides information regarding the
number
of tourists visiting a Caribbean
Island
from 2010 until 2017. Overall
, the total number
of tourists who came to Caribbean
Island
experienced an upward trend from 2010 until 2017. Up until 2015, the number
of visitors staying on the island
always exceeded visitors staying on the cruise.
Looking in more detail, people who visited Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Island
and stayed on the
cruise ships in 2010 were more than a half and Correct article usage
apply
millions
. Even though the amount had a
stagnancy until 2011, it Correct article usage
apply
could climb
Wrong verb form
climbed
up
and reached 1,5 Rephrase
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
visitors in 2013. The Change preposition
apply
number
did not change from 2013 until 2015, however
it went down to approximately 1,25 Add a comma
however,
millions
in 2016 before Change to singular
million
bounced
back to 1,5 Wrong verb form
bouncing
millions
in 2017.
In 2010, there were around a quarter of Change to singular
million
millions
tourists that stayed on the Add the preposition
millions of
Caribbean
Island
. The number
increased in 2011 but then
fell down in 2012 before raising
Correct your spelling
rising
up
from 2013 until 2017 and it reached 2 Change preposition
apply
millions
people.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, caribbean, island, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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