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The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.

The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.
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The table describes the projected costings in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry over the next five years. The expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year is provided by the pie chart. As can be seen from the table,
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 that includes the highest costings for the next five years is
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 Asia. Meanwhile,
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West Africa has the lowest expenditure. In the difference, the authorities will spend
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tens of millions
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 in
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Southeast
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 Asia,
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 West Africa is going to
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 about some
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. Central America will belong 20 million dollars in
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Year 1.
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five
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 Central America accounts only for 25 per cent of the initial expenditure. It is clear from the pie chart that spendings on the set-up costs in Year 1 are rated
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 half of
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all.
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, the percentage of the office expenses and the training is projected to the almost equal numbers. And the people will receive only 30 per cent
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 their salaries.
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