The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table displays

the

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information about how people

spend

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their money on different objects in five different countries in 2002.

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, the most money was spent on

nutritions

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nutrition

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and the less - on leisure/education in all countries. Starting with food/

drins

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drinks

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/tobacco, the leader in

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category was Turkey with the index, showing 32,14%.

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comes Ireland with 28,91%, Spain with 18,80%, Italy with 16,36% and the

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one is Sweden with 15,77% of all consumer expenditure. To continue with clothing/footwear, Italians spent 9% of their spending

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clothing, which was the highest rank. In Turkey, Spain and Ireland the indicators are close to each other showing 6,63%, 6,51% and 6,43% respectively. Again Sweden had the

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spending with 5,40%.

On leisure

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Leisure

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and education were focused

Turkish

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on Turkish

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people, whose expenses amounted to 4.35%. The Swedish and Italian indices differ by only 0.02%, amounting to 3.20% and 3.22%. In Ireland and Spain, people spent only 2,21% and 1,98% of their money on leisure/education respectively.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

161 words

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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