The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides information about the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per individual in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, it is clear from the line graph that Italy and Portugal
initially
experienced a low emission. Eventually, it managed to incline till the end of the year.
However
,
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shows the United Kingdom and Sweden had a good increase in the start but failed to increase over the period of years.
Moreover
, all the countries had some fluctuations.
Firstly
, in 1967 CO2 emission in
the
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Portugal had approximately one metric
tonnes
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and escalated a steady growth for the following decades. During the period of 1977, it rose around 2
tonnes
followed by the upcoming decade it
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almost 4
tonnes
and experienced a steady line in the years 1977 and 2007.
Whereas
, Italy had a similar
inclanation
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inclination
compared to Portugal having double-half of its metric to
tonnes
.
Secondly
, the United Kingdom had larger
emission
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of almost 11 metics at first and started to show
downtrend
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for the upcoming decades.
Furthermore
, Sweden
initially
started at the point of 8 metrics and made a significant growth in 1977 ranging the level of above 10 metrics and produced a drastic decrease in the year 1987 followed by the next decade and ended up in 2007 with the metric of almost 5.
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