The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
Two diagram illustrates how the seaside area of Darwin transformed. In the 5 year period from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
, the waterfront zone of Linking Words
this
town underwent various drastic changes. The most features are the construction of the new harbour,the removal of industrial space and the expansion of the housing space.
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, to the north, the school, convention centre, lake and fishing area still remained intact Linking Words
while
the industrial zone was replaced by an oval swimming pool. In the middle, the residential housing expanded and a new university building was constructed next to the living space making the quality of life of the people there better.
In the south, the big factory zone was transformed into a huge forest. On the right side, a new harbour was built. Linking Words
In addition
, there is a new path connecting the seaside to the west. Throughout various developments, Darwin became modern and convenient for inhabitants' lifeLinking Words
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