Increasingly, many governments around the world are choosing to provide greater funding for scientific and technological development rather than investing in arts and culture. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays,

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governments prefer to invest in the fields of science and technology and ignore the importance of the

arts

and

culture

. Personally, I think

this

choice could have a negative influence on

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society, and the following content will list the reasons.

Arts

and

culture

are the way to express

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feeling

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feelings

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and release

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pressure.

While

the community only focus on the practical and efficient usage of the profession, most of them will neglect the mental aspect,

therefore

, many of

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them accumulate the pressure and

finally

cause psychological diseases.

For instance

, during the

lock down

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, plenty of workers suffered from mental illness because they couldn’t find a way to relax, so several psychologists suggested

people

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learn about

arts

which can assist

people

to release their accumulated stress. The various kinds of

arts

and

culture

build

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world. If there is a nation which only

focus

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on practical profession and

develop

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nothing about the

culture

, it could become a boring and stressful place

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.

Culture

deeply

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roots in

people

’s lives,

for example

, the foods, clothes and festivals, all of these elements create

people

’s

colorful

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lives.

Furthermore

, unique

culture

and

arts

can not only make

people

’s lives more interesting but

also

the governments can get benefits from tourism. In conclusion,

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culture

and

arts

can make

people

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a

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exciting lifestyle and maintain

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psychological health for the

people

,

hence

, these are the main reasons for me to financially support the development in these fields.