In recent years foreign visitors should be charged more than local. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some

tourist

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destinitions

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destinations

have different rates for

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tourist

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from outside the country.

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special

prices

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price

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has

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raised

a

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debate

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about wether

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wether

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whether

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it has

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benefit

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for the

locals

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.

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essay will explore the merit of

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proposal and

cosidering

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considering

both

advantage

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advantages

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and

disadvanges

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disadvantages

.

One

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side of the argument, some people have the opinion that

locals

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should pay less money

on

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for

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the attractions compared to foreigners.

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is belived

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believed

to have positive impacts

for

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on

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locals

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as it can

improved

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the local economy. The development of the infrastructure and services could rely

from

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on

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this

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income.

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, it could

also

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benefit

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the local businesses and

appreciates

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their products by introducing them to the

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.

Conversly

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, critics argue that

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price discrimination can seem unfair.

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could impact the situation negatively and

descourage

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discourage

discouraged

tourism. If

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occurs, the local economy will be

effected

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affected

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especially for those who rely the most on

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income.

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business that produces

craftmanship

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of the local culture could lose their job. In my view,

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the intention behind charging the foreigner more than

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the local

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is commendable, some other things still

needed

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to be considered. Offering options of the services and products can

benefit

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both

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tourist

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tourists

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and

locals

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as they can adjust to their own liking. With the different currencies, foreigners may willing to spend more for

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better services/products but at the same time

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more affordable options

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also

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available for the ones who need

it

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them

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.

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, the different rate for foreign

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tourist

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tourists

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is a well-intentioned effort to improve

local

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the local

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economy.

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a

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apply

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various deals and

offer

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offers

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would create a balanced

benefit

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for both

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tourist

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tourists

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and

local

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locals

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. By creating options that fit with different preferences rather than have

a

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price discrimination towards the foreigner.