The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The presented pictures demonstrate the transformation of the
island
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after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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, a comparison of
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the two
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maps reveals a change from an ordinary uninhabited
island
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to a large tourist complex.
Initially
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,
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island
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the island
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had a lot of empty space and some trees, but by the end of it, the
island
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experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all the empty space in the middle is now filled with different buildings.
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, the pier was built and boats now drift nearby. It is interesting to note that the main building is the reception. It is located in the very
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and there are houses and a restaurant set around it.
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, there is now a place for swimming on the beach. I
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would like to note that the east part of the
island
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is still untouched, leaving room for future entertainment buildings.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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