The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The map presents

the

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information on

two

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possible sites for placing

for

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the planned supermarket in Garlsdon.

Overall

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two

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the two

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placements are different,

however

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, both of them are located near the

housings

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housing

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and railway in the same city. The first planned venue will be located in

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countryside near

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the railway and traffic zones,

while

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the second will be in a town

center

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without any traffic zones, but, with a railway passing through. The S1 will be way

further

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from the housing,

while

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the S2

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will be very close to them.

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, S1 will be located nearer to

two

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destinations,

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the Hindon and Bransdon with ten thousand and fifteen thousand populations,

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S2 will be

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closer to Cransdon, which

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even

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an even

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more population of 29000

cittizens

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citizens

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those

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total number of people in those both venues.

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, S2 will be closer to

two

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industries of the city,

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S1 will be located near

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only one of them.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and includes relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, fooddays, food travels long distances before reaching consumers, and it is therefore believed that consuming locally grown food would bring about a number of economic and environmental benefits. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages ?

In some countries the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation, and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.