The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps illustrate the before and after of an
island
, and the developments which took place there to meet tourists.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban landscape.
Before island
was empty and there were
just some palmas, Change the verb form
was
however
, after construction island
was altered 100%.
The first and significant
spot is a pier where tourists can dock their boats and get to the Correct quantifier usage
most significant
island
. A considerable amount of sufficient accommodations were built, additionally
to commute from the pier and around the island
footpath, and vehicle track
were constructed.
As Change the form of the verb
tracks
this
island
is surrounded by the sea, near the beach tourists can find area
for safe swimming, where they can get from their housings by footpath. Add an article
an area
the area
Furthermore
, restaurant and reception are necessary to meet all standards of this
tourist area.Submitted by dnm.best on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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