In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Moving from a remote area to the

city

center

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has become a trend nowadays globally;

therefore

, the number of

people

in the

village

has significantly dropped.

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that

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urbanisation has a deteriorating effect on the economy in the

village

and gain more criminals in the

city

.

Firstly

, most young

people

tend to gain their income by working in the

city

since the local government does not provide more jobs for youngsters. Communities rely on their trading activities in the youngsters since most of them develop the market.

Nonetheless

, young entrepreneurs in the

village

have not gained the

result

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as expected. Money circulation in villages has not worked well

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so

that

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the

city

becomes an option for youngsters to earn more money. Another thing to consider is the sustainability of culture might diminish since the

numbers

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of the next generation in the

village

are

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declining.

Hence

, government and schools have to put in local custom as a subject so their mores remain forever even though many villagers move outside. The effect

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urbanisation showed in the

city

as well. On

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serious note, owing to the increasing population, it created unethical activities that could jeopardize the community in the

city

. To exemplify

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, Jakarta as

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metropolitan

city

has multiple issues specifically in crime. These conditions were the result of numerous unemployment raised by urbanisation. As needs are higher than wages, some

people

steal stuff or make some noise.

For

this

reason, governments have to develop more jobs for their citizens and build skills by creating some training.

To sum up

, I firmly believe that moving

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the town

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more negative impacts

outweighs

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the benefits, in the

village

and

city

as well. To tackle these issues, governments have to establish jobs in both areas

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and facilities for young

people

to expand their skills in order to contribute to their

village

development.