A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Ali,
I hope you are doing well. I just got your letter yesterday, in which you shared your thoughts on going on a camping
tour
holiday. I am so happy and excited to read your letter regarding your travel and want to share my opinion on this
as well.
To begin
with, my personal suggestion to you on this
tour
is to select a place which is not so hot in this
summer season so you can enjoy your trip without getting exhaust
and Change the verb form
exhausted
secondly
, make a list of essential items which you may need on you tour
holiday so you do not miss anything and does not face difficulty.
However
, I was also
planning to go on a camping trip in this
summer holidays but now suddenly a very close family wedding function has to happen in the coming summer holidays so , my plan of going on the tour
has been postponed but I wish you a safe and happy trip ahead and keep in touch with me so, I can inquire your well being.
yours sincerely,
Ramisha.Submitted by ramisha.ejaz23 on
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task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task. The letter still lacks clear advice why the friend would enjoy camping, detailed drawbacks, and a definitive answer on joining the camping trip.
coherence cohesion
A logical structure could be improved by organizing the content into clear paragraphs and using cohesive devices to connect ideas more effectively.
coherence cohesion
A single idea per paragraph should be maintained. Separate distinct ideas into individual paragraphs for clarity.
coherence cohesion
The tone is quite informal which fits the letter style but be mindful of your language choices to maintain that informality consistently.