The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The map
illustrate
the development Change the verb form
illustrates
at
the waterfront area in Change preposition
of
a
Darwin town Correct article usage
apply
since
2009 to 2014
It is immediately noticeable that Change preposition
from
industrial
area was demolished and replaced by Correct article usage
the industrial
Correct article usage
a swiming
swiming
pool . Correct your spelling
swimming
The another
significant change was observed by adding Remove the article
Another
harbour
on the sea . Industrial Correct article usage
a harbour
zone
had been Fix the agreement mistake
zones
tranfsormed
into green spaces . Correct your spelling
transformed
Also
between trees had been equipped the footpath which connected harbour
and artificial forest . Correct article usage
the harbour
Moreover
theAdd a comma
Moreover,
amout
of residential Correct your spelling
amount
building
increased in 5 years for 3 to 6 . Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
In addition
, instead
industrial zone
had Fix the agreement mistake
zones
builted
new education Correct your spelling
built
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
such
Change preposition
as university
university
.
It is obvious , that some location of facilities has not changed . Fix the agreement mistake
universities
For instance
location
ofAdd an article
the location
2
swimming pool still remain the same . Correct article usage
the 2
Furthermore
, convention
Correct article usage
the convention
center
, fishing zone and school Change the spelling
centre
has
not Change the verb form
have
replaced
.
Looking from the Add a missing verb
been replaced
overall
perspective , it is notable that Darwin village
has developed by adding Capitalize word
Village
a new facilities
.Correct the article-noun agreement
new facilities
a new facility
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