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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the
number
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 of
visitors
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 in a Caribbean island who stayed on cruise ships and stayed on the island from 2010 to 2017
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 and
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 illustrates the total
number
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 of passengers in the same period. In general, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 has a considerable growth from 1
million
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 to 3.5
million
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 in total.
According to
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 the figure, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 who chose the cruise ship as accommodation
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 has risen dramatically by about 1
million
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 from 2011 to 2013 and reached 1.5
million
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 after one year of stability,
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, it reached another plateau for two years and after a dip in 2016 it finished off at 1.5
million
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 in 2017.
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 the
number
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 of passengers who stayed on the island which was less than 0.5
million
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 in 2010, fluctuated for three years and rose dramatically to 2
million
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 by the end of the period. What is more, it can be seen that the total
number
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 of
visitors
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 has risen sharply in the first five years from 1
million
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 to more than 2.5
million
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 and after one year of stabilization, soared to 3.5
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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