110.Some people believe that nowdays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that
individuals
think that nowadays there are too many options to choose from. This
essay completely agrees with this
statement because these days what is important is to do what they like, but this
can lead to confusion and stress.
Nowadays, people
only follow their hearts and do what they like. In the past, individuals
were not able to make a lot of decisions
, since their parents were the ones that made the decisions
and they had no choice but to accept what they were offered. Now, parents and other people
respect each other, so let individuals
make their own decisions
, such
as what they want to eat, to study or to wear. Recent research concluded that people
have approximately 120% more choices than there were in the last
decades.
The main issues of this
situation are confusion and stress. This
is because there are products that are very similar, with the same appearance, the only difference could be the material or some changes in the interior of the product. However
, not every individual understands or knows how to find the differences, so people
may waste hours investigating why the price of the product is different and which one they should buy. Normally, technical words are used to describe products, which leads to misunderstanding, so people
get stressed and confused by all the details offered. For instance
, many technological products such
as computers, cameras and mobile phones use words which normal people
may not understand.
In conclusion, people
make many decisions
because nowadays individuals
like following their feelings, and this
may cause pressure and uncertainty when choosing.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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coherence cohesion
The essay needs a clearer logical structure and better paragraphing. Ideas must flow naturally from one to the next with clear topic sentences.
task achievement
Support each main point with specific examples or data to give strength to your arguments and to demonstrate an understanding of the topic.
Your opinion
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?