The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph depicts the percentage of the senior population, who are older than 65, in three countries over a 100-year
period
, between 1940 and 2040. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is visible that all three countries experienced a significant fluctuation, Linking Words
however
, it forecasts that Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
, Japan will gain the highest proportion of aged Use synonyms
people
.
Having a detailed look at the line graph, the greatest rate of aged Use synonyms
people
was in the Use synonyms
USA
reaching almost 10% in 1940. Followed by, the percentage of elderly Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Sweden
was approximately 6% in the same year. They both experienced a steady increase until 1980, reaching 15% in the Use synonyms
USA
and almost 14% in Use synonyms
Sweden
. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
USA
remained approximately the same in the next 40 years, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
Sweden
underwent a dramatic increase making up almost 18% of the aged Use synonyms
people
in 2020. The graph anticipates that Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
, they both will significantly increase, 25% in the Use synonyms
USA
and roughly 24% in Use synonyms
Sweden
, respectively.
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According to
Japan, the proportion of the elderly generation was the lowest in 1940, reaching 5%. It is crystal clear that Japan experienced a steady decrease in the next 60 years and reached its start point in 2000. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, it experienced a skyrocketed change reaching 25% in the middle of 2020 and 2040 and continued to grow throughout the end of the Linking Words
period
, outracing The Use synonyms
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
.Use synonyms
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