The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph depicts the percentage of the senior population, who are older than 65, in three countries over a 100-year
period
, between 1940 and 2040. Overall
, it is visible that all three countries experienced a significant fluctuation, however
, it forecasts that at the end
of the period
, Japan will gain the highest proportion of aged people
.
Having a detailed look at the line graph, the greatest rate of aged people
was in the USA
reaching almost 10% in 1940. Followed by, the percentage of elderly people
in Sweden
was approximately 6% in the same year. They both experienced a steady increase until 1980, reaching 15% in the USA
and almost 14% in Sweden
. Then
, the USA
remained approximately the same in the next 40 years, however
, Sweden
underwent a dramatic increase making up almost 18% of the aged people
in 2020. The graph anticipates that at the end
of the period
, they both will significantly increase, 25% in the USA
and roughly 24% in Sweden
, respectively.
According to
Japan, the proportion of the elderly generation was the lowest in 1940, reaching 5%. It is crystal clear that Japan experienced a steady decrease in the next 60 years and reached its start point in 2000. Nevertheless
, it experienced a skyrocketed change reaching 25% in the middle of 2020 and 2040 and continued to grow throughout the end of the period
, outracing The USA
and Sweden
.Submitted by hrushik2006 on
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