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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line graph depicts the percentage of the senior population, who are older than 65, in three countries over a 100-year
period
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, between 1940 and 2040.
Overall
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, it is visible that all three countries experienced a significant fluctuation,
however
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, it forecasts that
at the end
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 of the
period
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, Japan will gain the highest proportion of aged
people
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. Having a detailed look at the line graph, the greatest rate of aged
people
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 was in the
USA
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 reaching almost 10% in 1940. Followed by, the percentage of elderly
people
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 in
Sweden
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 was approximately 6% in the same year. They both experienced a steady increase until 1980, reaching 15% in the
USA
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 and almost 14% in
Sweden
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.
Then
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, the
USA
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 remained approximately the same in the next 40 years,
however
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,
Sweden
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 underwent a dramatic increase making up almost 18% of the aged
people
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 in 2020. The graph anticipates that
at the end
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 of the
period
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, they both will significantly increase, 25% in the
USA
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 and roughly 24% in
Sweden
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, respectively.
According to
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 Japan, the proportion of the elderly generation was the lowest in 1940, reaching 5%. It is crystal clear that Japan experienced a steady decrease in the next 60 years and reached its start point in 2000.
Nevertheless
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, it experienced a skyrocketed change reaching 25% in the middle of 2020 and 2040 and continued to grow throughout the end of the
period
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, outracing The
USA
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 and
Sweden
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, people, usa, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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