The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information and make a comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information and make a comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart and line graph illustrate the monthly expenditures of an American family in
dollars
on three different categories, which are food, gas and clothing, and their averages from January to April in the year 2010.
Overall
, it is noticeable that expenditure on food is almost high in every month except for April and the average of all the spending is about 425
dollars
during March, which implies that their expenditure is high during
this
time. It is evident that the family spent around 300
dollars
on their necessities. The expenses on food increased from January to February but decreased
thereafter
. The expenses on clothing spiked once in two months and it was about $550 in February and $675 in April.
However
, the expenditure on gas never once exceeded other spending.
Moreover
, expenses over
this
remained below 350
dollars
every time except for April, which was almost $550.
Submitted by tejanavyapc2000 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: