The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009
The pie charts illustrate that in 1999 and 2009 United States of America took a survey of the most popular leisure
Overall
, it is evident that walking leisure activities in 1999 had 29 per cent
,while
in 2009 leisure activities had 31 per cent
. In addition
, weightlifting is decreased in 2009
From relatively, small contribution given to both years is jogging compared to 1999 it is much more decreasing in 2009. In 1999 aerobics was 13 per cent
compared to 2009,it is falling very down just 4 per cent
However
, the walking percentage remained constant in both the years and in camping also
equal and swimming is contributed very low in 2009 compared to 1999, soccer remained the same and bicycling also
in the same pre cent
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