The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009

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The pie charts illustrate that in 1999 and 2009 United States of America took a survey of the most popular leisure

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, it is evident that walking leisure activities in 1999 had 29 per

cent

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in 2009 leisure activities had 31 per

cent

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, weightlifting is decreased in 2009 From relatively, small contribution given to both years is jogging compared to 1999 it is much more decreasing in 2009. In 1999 aerobics was 13 per

cent

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compared to 2009,it is falling very down just 4 per

cent

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, the walking percentage remained constant in both the years and in camping

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equal and swimming is contributed very low in 2009 compared to 1999, soccer remained the same and bicycling

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in the same pre

cent

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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127 words

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