The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart provides data about the expenditure of
France
and the United Kingdom
on consumer goods in 2010.
Overall
, both countries spent the most of
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apply
money
on cars and France
spent the lowest amount of money
on cameras, whereas
, the United Kingdom
spent the lowest amount of money
on perfume.
As can clearly be seen, both countries spent the most of money
on cars Correct pronoun usage
their money
France
spent 400000 pounds
sterling and the United Kingdom
spent 450000 pounds
sterling. France
spent roughly 370000 pounds
sterling on computers, while
, the United Kingdom
only spent 350000 pounds
sterling.
Both
Correct word choice
Neither
France
and
the United Correct word choice
nor
Kingdom
did not
Verb problem
apply
spend
much on perfume, Wrong verb form
spent
France
only spent 200000 pounds
sterling and the United Kingdom
spent less than 150000 pounds
sterling which had the lowest expenditure compared to other consumer goods. France
spent the lowest amount of money
on cameras(150000 pounds
sterling), however
, the United Kingdom
spent 350000 pounds
sterling on cameras.Submitted by lilit_margaryan2006 on
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