The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.
The table compares the payment of a normal family in Australia every month between 1991 and 2001.
In general, the total average spending in 2001 was higher than in 1991. As will be observed, most expenses were increased and the costs associated with clothes and transportation fell.
Spending on transportation decreased significantly from 70
AUD
to 45 Use synonyms
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. The next least falling category was clothing, which accepted payments Use synonyms
up
to 30 Change preposition
of up
AUD
in 1991 before declining by 33% the following year.
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By contrast
, there was a 5 Linking Words
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difference in food spending, indicating a modest rise between the ten years from 1991 to 2001. Comparable trends are evident when it comes to housing, which accounted for 100 Use synonyms
AUD
in 2001—just 5 Use synonyms
AUD
more than ten years earlier. Use synonyms
However
, the average amount spent on water and electricity increased significantly by 45 Linking Words
AUD
, indicating big additions in its expenses. Use synonyms
Finally
, the expenditure on the other goods and services is the highest among the given categories from 250 Linking Words
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to 270 Use synonyms
AUD
.Use synonyms
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