A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay in your letter: -- Give your friend information about the location of your house -- Tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day -- Explain what he/she can do and see in your area
Dear Lily ,
I hope you are doing well.I am very ecstatic to have
such
a supportive friend with me.I am writing to express my immeasurable mercy for your altruistic and brave action.
I've been planning to visit my grandparents in Brazil for a long time, but I was worried about who to leave in my house .Thanks to your assist
, next Friday I will make my dream trip come true.
By the way, I Replace the word
assistance
Add a missing verb
am incline
incline
to convey my address. I live at 24 Abbey Rise Street, New York. There are distinctive Replace the word
inclined
garden
and Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
garage
. You know that I am passionate about flowers, I hope you will take care of them. Fix the agreement mistake
garages
Additionally
, I have a
Change the article
an
11-month old
kitten called Tom. He is a bit playful. So, please do not forget to water the flowers and feed Tommy. Do you believe Add a hyphen
11-month-old
or
not the night in New York is just incredible Correct pronoun usage
it or
as well
as
my Correct word choice
and
next door
neighbour Granny Jo is very cheerful. I would suggest you to chat with her.
I regret that I could not thank you enough. After I come back home, please visit us with your family. I am sure you will have a magnificent time here.
My thanks and appreciation,
BrunaAdd a hyphen
next-door
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that your letter has a logical structure which includes a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and sign-offs in your letter. The greeting should address the friend by name and the closing should be consistent with the overall tone of the letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph for clarity. Each of the tasks your friend needs to accomplish should be in separate paragraphs for easy comprehension.
Task Achievement
Ensure you complete the task by fully addressing all three points provided in the prompt. Expand on the tasks to be done and what can be seen in the area.
Task Achievement
Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter which should be friendly and informative, as it is addressed to a friend.