A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay in your letter: -- Give your friend information about the location of your house -- Tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day -- Explain what he/she can do and see in your area

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Dear Lily , I hope you are doing well.I am very ecstatic to have

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a supportive friend with me.I am writing to express my immeasurable mercy for your altruistic and brave action. I've been planning to visit my grandparents in Brazil for a long time, but I was worried about who to leave in my house .Thanks to your

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, next Friday I will make my dream trip come true. By the way, I

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incline

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to convey my address. I live at 24 Abbey Rise Street, New York. There are distinctive

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garage

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. You know that I am passionate about flowers, I hope you will take care of them.

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, I have

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11-month old

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kitten called Tom. He is a bit playful. So, please do not forget to water the flowers and feed Tommy. Do you believe

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not the night in New York is just incredible

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next door

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neighbour Granny Jo is very cheerful. I would suggest you to chat with her. I regret that I could not thank you enough. After I come back home, please visit us with your family. I am sure you will have a magnificent time here. My thanks and appreciation, Bruna

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that your letter has a logical structure which includes a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Coherence & Cohesion

Use appropriate greetings and sign-offs in your letter. The greeting should address the friend by name and the closing should be consistent with the overall tone of the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

Stick to one idea per paragraph for clarity. Each of the tasks your friend needs to accomplish should be in separate paragraphs for easy comprehension.

Task Achievement

Ensure you complete the task by fully addressing all three points provided in the prompt. Expand on the tasks to be done and what can be seen in the area.

Task Achievement

Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter which should be friendly and informative, as it is addressed to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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