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In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

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A
mother
's role and a
father
's role in how to treat its family could be
difference
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 in some parts of the world.
Cultures
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 of
a
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the
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 country where the couple live
in
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, among other aspects, is the main reason
of
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why
this
 circumstance
rose
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arose
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.
However
, as
the
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time goes by, I think
this
 situation might be changed since there are a
lof
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 of contradictive stories as references for the couple. If we look at countries,
for instance
, in Asia, most of the
poeple
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people
 will say that a
father
's job is to work all day and feed his family
while
 a
mother
's job is to be a housewife and to be there for her kids. It is like it was already defined since they were a child, and it goes with them until they are married. Asian culture sticks with them, and they feel obliged to follow the circumstances.
In addition
, there are
also
 pressures from
their
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 older generation,
such
 as their parents, who already did the kind of roles and there is a possibility that they will be mad if their
children
 do not pursue the same thing.
On the other hand
,
currently
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 there are a lot of references for a married couple to alternate their way of parenting. Many websites on the internet tell successful
business women
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businesswomen
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,
where
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that
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 a
mother
 could work as much as she is available for her
children
. There are lots of
way
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ways
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 to do so,
such
 as working from home or video-calling their
children
 from the office. TV shows
also
 give new perspectives of how sometimes a
father
 should
also
takes
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 care of
houseold
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household
 matters
as well as
to
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have
a
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quality time with his
children
. With
this
 kind of arrangement,
children
 could feel their
father
's presence in their life. A strong culture has been the main reason
of
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why there are different roles of a
mother
 and a
father
 in a house.
However
, in the future, spouses could choose to take references in order to change
this
 mindset.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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