The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Write at least 150 words.
The given
map
Use synonyms
depict
an industrial area in the town of Norbiton in the present time and a plan Change the verb form
depicts
of
future Change preposition
for
development
. Use synonyms
Main
areas on the Correct article usage
The main
map
are Use synonyms
a
farmland, a Remove the article
apply
river
and an industrial areaUse synonyms
itself
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Additionally
, a town is illustrated as Linking Words
line
on the west side of the Add an article
a line
the line
map
.
Currently, an industrial area is presented with several numbers of factory buildings. These factories are located around a road and a circle part of it. In the future, Use synonyms
according
the planned Add the preposition
according to
development
, Use synonyms
instead
of a factory will be build a housing place. The Linking Words
map
shows that part of Use synonyms
houses
will be located Correct article usage
the houses
accross
the Correct your spelling
across
river
Use synonyms
on
the North, Change preposition
in
hence
Linking Words
here
will be a bridge. A playground and a school are located on the east part of the Correct your spelling
there
map
. There are two new buildings Use synonyms
nearby
the circle road in the center of the Correct your spelling
near
map
. Use synonyms
According to
the plan Linking Words
of
Change preposition
for
a
future Remove the article
apply
Use synonyms
development
there are shops and a medical centre.
Add a comma
development,
Summarise
the changes, here is a big Fix the infinitive
To summarise
development
in Use synonyms
a
farmland. Housing with the school, shops and Remove the article
apply
the
medical Correct article usage
apply
center
replace factory buildings. Changes will Change the spelling
centre
also
touch the Linking Words
river
, with Use synonyms
new
bridge and an additional house Add an article
a new
the new
accross
the Correct your spelling
across
river
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, development, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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